Did someone say Ottava Rima?

Well, I've said it before and I'll say it again. Your love poems are the great. You convey so much love and admiration in your poems without becoming sticky sweet. It's a beautiful poem and I love the form and rhyme of the Ottava Rima. Like you, I prefer lyrical poems and even though I've been trying to not use end rhymes, I still use alliteration and internal rhyme simply because I love the sound of rhyme. Keep up the wonderful work.