A Blade of Gr...any comments, please?

I like it. It starts out with sort of a challenge to Walt Whitman's theme in "Leaves of Gr," where he describes a leaf of gr as being what connects us all to one another. But it turns in the end and describes that very same connection but just in a different way, which actually works to bring your theme out. I think the whole poem works very well. DO NOT CHANGE THE CLOSING. It would not work without it.